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@AeeYo
.SiQ.
Aeeyo
12lines max
Due 24hrs after both check-ins
Remember ur vote links
This is my check... I'll have my links soon
@AeeYo
waiting on you.
i had you pegged last week, you gladly follow the rules, a real stand-up class geek
but you inconsistently drop hot shit, how you spit depends like old niggas ass cheeks//
just once come nasty, but you a good guy, a buddy, one of them shifty ride or die herbs
i'd even let dickless chill wit my girl, and i'm not even worried if this itsy-bitsy spy'd her//
cause you ain't pack'n, a typical suburban white herb... snap, crackle and pop this bitch dweeb
no wonder chicks flee, you ain't put'n in that work, wit a tool the size of a rice crispy//
yeah, let me chill with this dissing, and switch things to address the obvious you be missing
i don't usually fuk wit a pedophile nigga who wants to see a "12 max" after he cums with a 16//
i get sicker every time i drop somethin, i'm ripping, i swear nigga, you better bring your best
and don't try to add your weak multis and stretch your material like you're David Banner's chest//
so come wit it, or choke with your neck baring my thumb printed on your esophagus to stop ya spit
but let's be honest, you'll struggle to form 12 lines, your like a Wal-Mart from five to six//
Ayo, Aeeyo...
Ur verse against Bah' was blah, he's gonna fuckin roast u
Plus ur last match reminded me of social media the way Net exposed u
For this holiday season, I turned ur girl to the biggest slut
Its 1 week after Thanksgiving & that bird still gettin stuffed
I go raw.. never knew what a condiment when I fucked ur lame hoe
When yall play ketchup, u can ask if she's pregnant... I bet she mayo!
This clown'll mumble once I put the gun to this kid
Let off 6ix 9ines at his dome until it colors his wig
Fukin retard, u should of studied cuz my rhymes'll test u
Not sayin ur slow, but ur white crayon on loose leaf kinda special
These slugs'll have u missin forever, once I empty tecs fast
Mom'll be searchin; screamin out Aeeyo more than DMX tracks
And still wont fukin find u.
8
Bar 1- Siq
Bar 2- Siq
Bar 3- Aeeyo
Bar 4- Siq
Bar 5- Siq
Bar 6- Siq, this bar was close.
This was a cool battle. Both had some good shit, but I feel like Siq was more consistent with the punches, whereas Aeeyo struggled with concepts.
Vote - Siq
the closer was probably your better bar in all actuality. Except you didn't even care to rhyme any syllables... Plus the wording was definitely off.
8/20
15/20
Overall: I think aeeyo had some interesting concepts just didn't pull off an effective punch. Less detailed and wasn't directed hard enough towards his opponent. SiQ, you had a few hits and misses too. Better structure and flowed more easier for the readers. So I have to give SiQ as the declared winner. More consistent as well. Good battle tho guys.
The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.
@AeeYo -
i had you pegged last week, you gladly follow the rules, a real stand-up class geek
but you inconsistently drop hot shit, how you spit depends like old niggas ass cheeks//
This was okay i guess, not too good but it was okay..
just once come nasty, but you a good guy, a buddy, one of them shifty ride or die herbs
i'd even let dickless chill wit my girl, and i'm not even worried if this itsy-bitsy spy'd her//
This was better, not too bad here..
cause you ain't pack'n, a typical suburban white herb... snap, crackle and pop this bitch dweeb
no wonder chicks flee, you ain't put'n in that work, wit a tool the size of a rice crispy//
ohhh rice crispy's niice, but not too hard-htting..a soft jab..
yeah, let me chill with this dissing, and switch things to address the obvious you be missing
i don't usually fuk wit a pedophile nigga who wants to see a "12 max" after he cums with a 16//
lol..this was okay..could've been better..
i get sicker every time i drop somethin, i'm ripping, i swear nigga, you better bring your best
and don't try to add your weak multis and stretch your material like you're David Banner's chest//
This was better..nice one for a while..
so come wit it, or choke with your neck baring my thumb printed on your esophagus to stop ya spit
but let's be honest, you'll struggle to form 12 lines, your like a Wal-Mart from five to six//
this was good..niice one..
@siQ -
Ur verse against Bah' was blah, he's gonna fuckin roast u
Plus ur last match reminded me of social media the way Net exposed u
This was good..nice job here..
For this holiday season, I turned ur girl to the biggest slut
Its 1 week after Thanksgiving & that bird still gettin stuffed
nice..good job here..in a way..
I go raw.. never knew what a condiment when I fucked ur lame hoe
When yall play ketchup, u can ask if she's pregnant... I bet she mayo!
loool..not too shabby..
This clown'll mumble once I put the gun to this kid
Let off 6ix 9ines at his dome until it colors his wig
lool..niice..
Fukin retard, u should of studied cuz my rhymes'll test u
Not sayin ur slow, but ur white crayon on loose leaf kinda special
niice..one here..
These slugs'll have u missin forever, once I empty tecs fast
Mom'll be searchin; screamin out Aeeyo more than DMX tracks
this is one of your weaker bars..but okay..
overall - good battle guys..but i have to go with one i thought was more consistent..and that was SiQ..vote SiQ
V/ SiQ
nothin'
vs.
This clown'll mumble once I put the gun to this kid
Let off 6ix 9ines at his dome until it colors his wig
Fukin retard, u should of studied cuz my rhymes'll test u
Not sayin ur slow, but ur white crayon on loose leaf kinda special
V/Siq punches were more well rounded and hit harder/ less played
Siq is leading 4-0 Closing the thread on the 5th. Upping for finals votes
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