12 lines due by Tuesday night at 11:59 pm? or u want it earlier idc
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@Authentic. this is my check in
Clout
Authentic
12 lines due by Tuesday night at 11:59 pm? or u want it earlier idc
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@Authentic. this is my check in
@Kill Spree I got 12 for authentic. But he hasn't checked in.
My fault, c.. I'm here. Post when you ready.. I'm bout to put sumn together.
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See we text battle stars, still he dont wanna war wit a star, cuz.. I peepd ya man's dolo..
fuck the pistols and bros hoe, when it comes to Star Wars.. you can get these Hans Solo!
In the hood on game shit.. go hard in the paint, n fuck wit them K.A.Ts that shoot the ops
idgaf what yo archtype is on 2k.. you the weakest center eva! You not good on the block..
Clout.. yea he got it with the all the hoes the real niggas wouldnt fuck, so he do us a favor..
they fuck erbody, n this tough guy brag about lickin that dangerous twat... boi was gladiator!
N i dont travel far, the only time i go overseas.. is to put the gun under his chin, to his dome..
squeeze off.. and watch an American tool turn clout's colossal head into a Colosseum from Rome
Still no personal dropped, but the personal bitch i got, loyal, and i hold her down on my own..
This pistol pretty, polished, and plated.. wit all kinda C on it... and i aint talkin bout Chrome!
Drummer boi, fully loaded! i'll hit you Lo Mein... startin from the bottom.. fuckin up ya crew cut
choppa rippin ya pack apart.. tryn be like Drake.. u just Top Ramen, another noodle soup'd up
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Hey nice selfie as an Avy pic..NOT
His alias? means bonafide yet u hide & no show it can't be helped.
Funny Ur called authentic? & he's a 'genuine' fagget who ain't 'real' w/ himself.
This dudes a Mess who'll dodge real writers as u peruse the vets,
Authentic's so fucking trash he even made the PBX appear to be a huge success.
No bitch'll care for ur caress. U rather semen over some thick hips.
& them verses show 'no sign of life' the shits more 'barren' than ur ratchet bitch is
Ya avy's 'smokey/obscure', comes across 'CLEARLY' as a shook type.
Giving us all an idea on what a broke ass disappointing welfare recipient looks like.
He's fake + disloyal so him being a true G? this Dudes dreaming
when u ghosted as RB's struggling? its give being a lowlife scumbag a new meaning
U dont vote daily or even show up to ur battles, u barely preform.
it makes u more of a piece of shit than the people who actually allowed u to be born
Go actually vote & participate u lame ass has been!
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@Kill Spree
This is hard
Authentic had concepts I had seen done slot
But he did them decently
Clout had some creative tries but kinda fumbled them
Both had some lines that were basically statements
I just can’t vote for that gladiator line. It’s just a really iconic hip hop line so I don’t see how u used it here
That and the dome to a stadium line got me leaning to clout for being more original
Not Impressed
1-0 me upping
Can anyone ever just get a vote for what they said in the verse and the impact it may or may not have had? lolsmh No hate @Clout by any means. Uppin 1 time. Lets get them votes.. Vote and i'll vote. Yall know i do.
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Authentic
See we text battle stars, still he dont wanna war wit a star, cuz.. I peepd ya man's dolo..
fuck the pistols and bros hoe, when it comes to Star Wars.. you can get these Hans Solo!
wording was meh 1/5
In the hood on game shit.. go hard in the paint, n fuck wit them K.A.Ts that shoot the ops
idgaf what yo archtype is on 2k.. you the weakest center eva! You not good on the block..
2/5
Clout.. yea he got it with the all the hoes the real niggas wouldnt fuck, so he do us a favor..
they fuck erbody, n this tough guy brag about lickin that dangerous twat... boi was gladiator!
2/5 punch just didnt have impact
N i dont travel far, the only time i go overseas.. is to put the gun under his chin, to his dome..
squeeze off.. and watch an American tool turn clout's colossal head into a Colosseum from Rome
3.5/5 i liked the visual on this. set up felt a bit shaky
Still no personal dropped, but the personal bitch i got, loyal, and i hold her down on my own..
This pistol pretty, polished, and plated.. wit all kinda C on it... and i aint talkin bout Chrome!
1/5 i just didnt like this bar. i didnt get it. its not clear to me whats going on about it and to op it off its not really a diss on your opponent.
Drummer boi, fully loaded! i'll hit you Lo Mein... startin from the bottom.. fuckin up ya crew cut
choppa rippin ya pack apart.. tryn be like Drake.. u just Top Ramen, another noodle soup'd up
1/5 this bar felt all over the place
10.5/30
vs
Clout
His alias? means bonafide yet u hide & no show it can't be helped.
Funny Ur called authentic? & he's a 'genuine' fagget who ain't 'real' w/ himself.
[B]2/5 this was ok. didnt see anything special tho[/B]
This dudes a Mess who'll dodge real writers as u peruse the vets,
Authentic's so fucking trash he even made the PBX appear to be a huge success.
1/5 no feeling this one
No bitch'll care for ur caress. U rather semen over some thick hips.
& them verses show 'no sign of life' the shits more 'barren' than ur ratchet bitch is
2/5 ok. needs some work tho
Ya avy's 'smokey/obscure', comes across 'CLEARLY' as a shook type.
Giving us all an idea on what a broke ass disappointing welfare recipient looks like.
2/5 wording was bad. i didnt see the connection between the set up and the punch. but i did laugh lol
He's fake + disloyal so him being a true G? this Dudes dreaming
when u ghosted as RB's struggling? its give being a lowlife scumbag a new meaning
1/5 i see what you are saying but i didnt see a punch here
U dont vote daily or even show up to ur battles, u barely preform.
it makes u more of a piece of shit than the people who actually allowed u to be born
2/5 i like the hostility but yea it no real punch here.
10/30
V/ Authentic-this battle was close imo. i feel as if both textcees lacked originality or effort in a lot of these bars.
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@Meth @Greedy @Kill Spree @Bayou @Barcotic
Can we got some votes for me and @Authentic. So we get can this one closed up
3TC
you look depressed as fuck in video mags, your fate is unfurled
I knew cameras add 10 lbs, didn't know it could add the weight of the world
Aero the Black Pegasus
Idk man ive read a few clout verses and thought hw was pretty solid but maybe this was a quick key or what idk just a lottttt of statementy bars with little or no tie ins at all. That style can work but ur wording has to be almost perfect or its gonna miss.
Authentic wasnt great. But he was wayyy more creative imo. Wording killed him bc he comes off corny sometimes, but i got him here for having better hits imo.
Good battle brethen
V authentic
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Bump.. chase them votes. Link for link.
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Fell like both missed an equal amount but Auth had more creative shit, Clout was cool but didn't hit all that hard imo
Auth had some tight concepts that could have been worded better but I'm leaning more towards him
Close battle here, Clout should have came more creative & he coulda had it IMO
See we text battle stars, still he dont wanna war wit a star, cuz.. I peepd ya man's dolo..
fuck the pistols and bros hoe, when it comes to Star Wars.. you can get these Hans Solo!
Cheesy and simple played concept
In the hood on game shit.. go hard in the paint, n fuck wit them K.A.Ts that shoot the ops
idgaf what yo archtype is on 2k.. you the weakest center eva! You not good on the block..
🔥🔥 another played concept but executed perfectly
Clout.. yea he got it with the all the hoes the real niggas wouldnt fuck, so he do us a favor..
they fuck erbody, n this tough guy brag about lickin that dangerous twat... boi was gladiator!
🔥🔥 like the concept but worded wrong
N i dont travel far, the only time i go overseas.. is to put the gun under his chin, to his dome..
squeeze off.. and watch an American tool turn clout's colossal head into a Colosseum from Rome
🔥🔥ok
Still no personal dropped, but the personal bitch i got, loyal, and i hold her down on my own..
This pistol pretty, polished, and plated.. wit all kinda C on it... and i aint talkin bout Chrome!
🔥🔥
Drummer boi, fully loaded! i'll hit you Lo Mein... startin from the bottom.. fuckin up ya crew cut
choppa rippin ya pack apart.. tryn be like Drake.. u just Top Ramen, another noodle soup'd up
I’m not feeling this
His alias? means bonafide yet u hide & no show it can't be helped.
Funny Ur called authentic? & he's a 'genuine' fagget who ain't 'real' w/ himself.
🔥🔥
This dudes a Mess who'll dodge real writers as u peruse the vets,
Authentic's so fucking trash he even made the PBX appear to be a huge success.
🔥🔥
No bitch'll care for ur caress. U rather semen over some thick hips.
& them verses show 'no sign of life' the shits more 'barren' than ur ratchet bitch is
🔥🔥
Ya avy's 'smokey/obscure', comes across 'CLEARLY' as a shook type.
Giving us all an idea on what a broke ass disappointing welfare recipient looks like.
🔥🔥
He's fake + disloyal so him being a true G? this Dudes dreaming
when u ghosted as RB's struggling? its give being a lowlife scumbag a new meaning
🔥🔥
U dont vote daily or even show up to ur battles, u barely preform.
it makes u more of a piece of shit than the people who actually allowed u to be born
🔥🔥
I think this battle is lackluster and very below average I’m giving this to clout for consistently coming at him