Let me be

[Heaven]

They tryin' to break me, fake me, resurrect me
Can't let the baby be
Gotta change, rearrange
Gotta flow too, alternatively
Waves of eternity pressin' out from me
Look in my eyes you see the way it's gonna be
I bring it back from the false waves of inconsequential fatalities
Lickity split I flip like you ain't never seen
The castigation of the sensation that I gotta be me
Make me doubt the sense and saying we live free
Cracking out the times; I don;t follow the scene
They be saying They be raging when they just sit in front of the T.V.
Speaking the talk don't mean you got fine in your mind
Bringing the hate to debate which rocks gonna fly
Ain't gonna go down like that while I'm still visualizing
What's that thing I be seeing
When you talking about aversion to people with there distinctions from class to creed
You be talking about my people because I be perceptive about their necessities
Supplying what you ain't got the heart to be buying
You just keep sitting there thinking about what you think you see
I'll be over here working on my masterpiece
Forever perfecting the resurrection of humanity
You can't
So don't think you can ever stomp my grounds
Work hard to be mistreated by substance
What with the mendacity and the wannabes
All freaked out wearing black thinking that's how to exist differently
Hard core sissy thinking it's all about jeans
Steal toed shoes think they got something on me
Everybody wearing them like they think they free
Slamming it down and playing they got a mind
Hiding what's real from even themselves
On the inside they to afraid to see
Peace, fool, it doesnt come easy
Spill it to keep it wile they faking away what you rewarded
Fluids flowing from you done stained your grave
Neglected by the head because you just a body
Well, to all those peps who think they hear me
Identify with the battle cry!
Dont step on me

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[<SamPle>]

is really nice flow, any thing bad i could see is that your ryhming is a bit repetitive e.g. me, free

[Heaven]

Ahahah yea I couldn't find anything better:P butthanks for the feedback

[F63]

it took me a while to figure out the flow, but once i did, it was pretty good. strong use of vocab, and good use of multies. however, i can't really tell what the topic is supposed to be. i can tell from the title, but if i just read the lyrics, i'd have no idea. i dunno if others got it, but i just personally didn't, but not a bad drop.