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Beat: Diamond Styles
Hook: Q (I chose a multi-layered hook...gave me some trouble mixing...but, I'm happy with the end result)
Verses: Q
Mix: Q
Concept: Another track about expressing your feelings without compromising who you are.
Holla
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Verse 1
I'm sittin here on my birthday, sittin' lonely
Not one phone call...man, if only
I could rise to the top of the building
Shake da earth like an earthquake, and kill em
Nah...I don't mean to sound sadistic
But when this shit hits me, like piles of bricks
Shit...So in this spit...I'm wild and distant
Participants lie like a child dat gets sick...
In my mom's arms...Asalamalacum
Um...arms break off when I can shake em
Off...fuck it all...I will call the race off
Cuz they...they got a false start like Usain Bolt
It ain't fair like a field slave skin...
But I still stay in good spirits can they win?
Nah..like Nas....one mic to the
Stars...I'mma blast off, then I'm gone...yall!
Verse 2
Dope...times...living in my prime...
Never knew what hit...I'm all outta time...
And theres this...scared lil kid inside
Tryna reach out, and tryna confide
My pride is hurt like child birth
I first...dats what they say...die, dirt
That's how I feel...but nobody feels me
Feels like cream filling in a twinkie...
Hidden...like hidden...city...feelin' shitty
Moms don't even call cuz I got witty
Balls to tell her, "Mom you were not there"
Now I'm forsaken like crack when cops appear
Back to my heart's fear...I'm really strugglin'
I can't trust nobody...so no body I'm fuckin' with
Fears of failure appear to tell the...lies
That I will not rise high...up to the sky
Hook: 2x
Sometimes...I think...I wanna die (die)
....(layer - Dat ain't even what I mean...I mean...that---)
Sometimes....I think...I wanna fly (fly)
.....(layer - It ain't even what it seems...I mean...that---)
..................(on the last bar say: Always (always)...Away)
(Background layer Sing: All right...it'll be All right)