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    sellin writtin album, haters love me

    i fixed the spelling, ya these arent free,
    this is a concept album called the std, standin for, societys total destruction, a conshious yet funny violent album adressing all of the problems with society, heres a sample of it, its copywrited, but if you want to buy it contact me,
    the price is not money, should be about a thousand dollors, you will get my email and password, with the songs on there with a date proving your owner ship

    intro, famous quote, georgie luther bum junior, the year 0, n 6 more zeroes

    i hav a dream, that one man man, n george man
    will together live apart, n chaos n destruction
    dont lay off the concussions, wen georges consciousness is regained, with fists they say
    lay off n rushin, since georgerene, rate of regeneration
    i previously remained tame, plain n anonymous
    my lame name, hatin it viciously, please wait, dont visit me
    since then, my brain evaporated, in my basement it blew
    raisin the roof, a plain, came in the hole,i cant explain my exclamation i flew
    a plan, came in my skull, shit, i aint changin it
    its what your changin yours to
    since then, dont sit,
    one shift of construction,
    n this entertainment, mainly me, will b fate of three generations
    were takin over, tank tranquilizin u yanks
    takin lines of our own punks,
    cuz gang, only operate, machinery drunk
    hangin over, wen its over, bang it over, soldier

    to the futures theres a missin link, like there was 2 the fuckin past
    either b a mini me, or like computers n gadgets of the past
    you'll fuckin vanish fast
    dont ask the name, after the song, yours n mine the same,
    wont ask the same, still after the song,
    yours n mine the name,here rather then gone
    were now the next piece in the chain, i came
    the next piece of the chain we'll b, i came

    a george you deserve to be, peep deep inside you
    fight fuk n drink, what we do peeps, besides do
    light up em things 2, lite a blunt,
    lite a church, ill dynamite lite this, run lay run on judgement day
    terminator on savers, we hunt flame guns, cyberdine likeness, yikes
    losers, stand back fast, sin earth sinners clueless 2 savin her
    proved solutions burnin past, burn ya washin tuns, first task
    were numerous numbers, but only want you watchin one one
    mothers no refusin us, slice haters babys
    one swift lift of dick, like lite sabers baby
    say luke, may the gorge b with you
    faint n die, or sway side 2 side
    say gorge, were with you,
    evolutions lubed, n turnin fast,
    turns, the who r u reusins up,its my turn 2 ask, wut

    to the futures theres a missin link, like there was 2 the fuckin past
    either b a mini me, or like computers n gadgets of the past
    you'll fuckin vanish fast
    dont ask the name, after the song, yours n mine the same,
    wont ask the same, still after the song,
    yours n mine the name,here rather then gone
    were now the next peice in the chain, i came
    the next piece of the chain we'll be, i came

    beat the book in ya beak, look manual reed
    2 repeat, a almost 3 word repeat, annual speech
    i spin grin my peach, three sixty, sixty three greets
    ya see me, ya cousin n him, lucus washington, cant forget bushy
    more war we fiend, what we risk if we win, dont give a shit
    guvenater cuts his face off,
    admits hes traiter faker, fuck a face off
    no scene of protest, or rise of machines
    snatch a microchip cookie, half bittin, from this batch i spittin
    kill my microwave a minute ago,
    you wave his ghost yet, your rise of the steam
    if fight, bright lite city scenery, where no one seems 2 notice
    raped names replaced, on pedigree, planet earth is now
    george is means me, everybodys sane safe place
    plan at first of god dog, im gods dog,the rebirths now

    when everyone, except one, converts in
    the thirdy nerdy skinny virgin, glasses white rebel
    well hand him a gat, and a free blast at my rite temple
    ya blow a hole, freein me from a rotten brain,
    freein you from a wrong gone game, fleein the skull, thoughts,
    not osamas plane , ya sorta covered for my man,
    abort the plan, just come to concert 4 my jam


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    im gods warrior terror, my sword n enemies are like my candy,
    the more the better, so lets see, if peace cant be, ima war forever
    i see chimpanzes, you see men, you your friends ya familys shot,
    got em stuffed, new wimpanzie museum,
    for biggie n easy, cuz they didnt die cookin cookies
    dont die a villain, ya live long enough to see yourself become a goodie goodie
    its past the season, 2 b jolly, tra la la la la, i shot u all, i mist nas n em,
    swish i off them heads,
    the only mc, glad pac is dead, seventeen n mean, get stabbed if you compliments
    caution men, gods sponserin,the real deel
    big l, did well, but off spring commin 2 evil,not a man
    but with fast reasonin gats, thats the reason, ya squeal squeal
    whatever doesnt kill you, makes you stronger or stranger, es
    repeatedly i die, whatever doesnt kill sin, makes me constantly angrier,
    not a black comedian, a leader thats political
    just wen u thought, this strange, stranger, cant get any, stranger
    you see a little piss, on my sneaker it trickled, the sequel deals you shit
    to obliderate, ya spirit waist, ya magic seventh death now, any last words,
    theres seven deaths in ya mouth, before thats heard, steal sealed you shit

    im the good guy, im here to rescue you, like cpr, ill give my breath to you
    ill blow a kiss, n give my breath to you, then blow a clip, n give that death to you
    im the good guy, youll see me star, the lonely seed, in this evil city
    people sayin, there aint crime, is like gorge sayin, i aint no rhyme
    im serious, i only see, these people silly
    i kill death, n steppin his shoes, im serious


    second servin, i know your hungry for more
    when the waiter, takes off the plate coverin,
    n you see a steamin gun
    you shoudnt take cutters, jump for cover, or even run
    but ya cuttin others, just 2 be runnin, jumpin to the front,
    as if its over, once ya hand, touches,
    the handle of the grumpy door, ya done
    but ya so slow mo, ya forks hangin half out ya mouth
    like out you drag ya hangin ass off ya couch
    o you sleep, n ya family carrys you on it out the house
    like how i carry you out, dont worry about ya spouse
    im only willin to be killin women n children, i let the men go
    so ride away, to my hideaway, for me to decide ya fate,
    over ya kills in nintendo
    so why you slumpin for your sun,
    the parkin lots covered, look at the other, hundred and for run
    oh its not ya sun, ya swore to scorch ya mother
    heres a torch gun, ya fuckin commin
    lets pause 2 test shots, on these cars in pause
    i forgot to add a address, now we gotta arrest,there hearts to stop
    till every villains head goes home to god

    chorus
    im the good guy, im here to rescue you, like cpr, ill give my breath to you
    ill blow a kiss, n give my breath to you, then blow a clip, n give that death to you
    im the good guy, youll see me star, the lonely seed, in this evil city
    people sayin, there aint crime, is like gorge sayin, i aint no rhyme
    im serious, i only see, these people silly
    i kill death, n steppin his shoes, im serious


    i say im evil, but lets switch to my personal perspective
    its strictly for my purposes profession
    im a good guy, who spit sum good lies, to good n blind people
    but my objectives, to burnin the world, was the wait worth the confession,
    wait wait wait one second
    wait wait wait,keep your hands off, the verses in session, ya cant stop me,
    dyin peacefuls , not on my plate, you feds stepin a second,
    this weapons wettin ya face
    i was the eyes, at the sacrafice of christ
    ill b alive, at the after life of life
    so you know, i can get stabbed, n hacked n sliced with knives
    if you vanish me, ill come back inside ya wife
    n just so you know, if you banish me, ill come back n try it twice,
    deaths a present, that'll protect ya safe
    if by chance ya get it, wanna ketch up spread me dead,
    itll spread n enhance my messidge
    that adds 2 tension, between my fan n henchmen n me
    the advantidge of you, who, is missin the angles, of a mission of a angle
    without wings,the halo, i just bought for holloween
    if im in town, scream if ya caught not followin me
    you can run, but i can drive, n against me, you can hide
    just make sure you dont wave wile u shovel, n dig ya grave in the rubble
    somewhere i cant find, no war singers fail, cuz everyone in the world,
    homicides n suicides, just now, n i only lifted a finger,
    2 finish this bagel, just now

    police wanna stop me, say please 4 this shottie, i cocked it,
    you can shoot it, n drop me,with a new suit , i arise in ya body
    these hands should be beatin n killin, theres a man 2 fracter
    but hands rebuild buildins, do bad, get bad, fuk bein beatin n killed,
    i manufacter happyness
    polece wanna copy me,im clappin this, there never clappin cuffs on me, momy
    ---

    the truths, stranger than fiction
    wen hittin pots, stranger than not, i went from the top of the class,
    to a top class mission, to be a missionary n carry what you fear, more than bear
    n suicide bombers, its a do or die, suicide honer, to show you what you stangers are missin
    just come after school to spark,
    not after dark, not far after scool 2 park
    just a tag along, little bruther,nervous quiet, a little studder
    followin, like saggin pants, dragin on, by a bathroom,
    i oberve in silence,freshmen hidin in a bush,
    wanna flash those girls your tits, is what a guy will ask you
    you do, eventually you hit the pipe, but inside the bathroom, not in the lite
    im the baby in the dipe, slide the pipe to my lips, no, no dick suking, i hold it,
    they begin 2 lite,
    the liter, im coughin n chokin, then fillin sick n tired, like my coffin is open,
    n all they say is, are you high yet, nope not high yet


    chorus 1
    its like ive alredy legalized weed,
    i dont care if u already, or never smoked it
    r u ready, i dont care, just smoke it
    the tracks ya first hit, its burnin
    the tracks so hot its burnin
    the traffic cops r burnin,
    ya smokin, n chokin, n thirstin, its ya legalized need
    we get that weed sack, pik out the seeds n stems, hit the weed n then
    we relax, r you hi yet, guy yet, hi yes, guy yes, its ya real lifes need

    i continue goin to the stoners, park n shit
    continue knowin no homework, i spark n lit
    when they asked if peir pressure i what
    if they ment, ear pressure i was
    impatient we waited, callin connects, of course i said no,
    are schools called ghetto, she has nun, he has nun, we call tocollect
    by the side walk theyed pull, or across street to meet
    twenty twentys, to get fuckin blunted up, in the ride, my friend took a seat
    the twenty somthin fuck, took the fuckin money,then shoved a gun to his tummy
    from the ride, he made him retreat, fleein on feet,
    cops saw all this, weed n weapons they kept in, even tho ethe street
    they wont be keepin that ride, ya we duckin campus guards n cops,
    teachers peer at me, curiously, i fearlessly gard my pot
    the nervous they suspect, but visine screens the red his white
    any one lookin dead guys hi, we smokin outa the apples, swollowin thousand of capsules
    inside classrooms, down one n thats all,n thats true, when a say, a teacher smoked

    with students,
    all rebel n addicts, get a hit in the bathroom,
    before you hear the bell for classes,
    if ya cought once they mark ya, so we stuffin the skunk, in our magic markers
    its like magic, it tragic, if ya quit puffin ya punks, with that bottle of deoder,
    you pray, wen you spray away, it hides the oder, stoners think were cool n shit,
    cops wanna stop us, lok us, keep us hiddin like lokness
    keep weed riddin, so we riffin, for wut reasin, who knows, the trees in this season,
    everyones doin it, old wifes, n husbands there suns, n everyones movin it
    when its illegal for kids, n drop outs 2 get jobs,
    we forget laws, to get somethin done,for new dough, you know
    if you a broke man, or broke mentally, its ya pro solution
    its a fucked up life, you dont care who ya walkin with
    you dont care if there talkin shit, gentle scenes, it throws illutions
    but no, white people say, that drugs are bad mmkay, ima grab the ak,
    n in ya face im shootin,why should i not, when you say im supposed to do it
    o no, its the evils legal day, kneel pray

    chorus 2
    its like ive already legalized weed,
    i dont care if u already, or never smoked it
    are you ready, i dont care, just smoke it
    the tracks ya first hit, its burnin
    the tracks so hot its burnin
    the traffic cops are burnin,
    ya smokin, n chokin, n thirstin, its ya legalized need
    cutt it up, pack it in, puff it up, pass to your left
    pass it bak, if you cant handle it, hold it in,
    blow it out, pass out, you wont be passin ya test
    this is ya dull, real lifes need

    so i tag along, to some house smokin session n shit, bongs, pipes, blunts
    no limit, 2 how many seconds id hit, alot a times id mess up, n swollow the smoke,
    n end up a mess,sick n sufferin, but when it came around again, id suck it in
    im still laughin n smilin, at nothin, from bein to high, n its 2 years fukin since
    id throw up, n tomarrow wus soaked with the scent,
    i had drank 3 water bottles, ate a bowl of romin,
    sittin sick, it felt as if, i hollowed of myself, of my soul with it
    bein high, id hear things, wisperin, bein high, id fear things, misery,
    wasnt fun, most of the time,whyd u do it, well why are you doin it,
    you wanna see if can hang with the most of em, ritee
    eventully, me n my friend were runnin out the campus
    we got cought, by a guy, who just stood glued in one spot,
    we were runnin out of chances, i got probed over, they found the home grown, i drove the road 2 probation
    drug classes, every week, then in classes, id forever speak, no homes, im goin home, got no dough, for a smokin rotation

    twist endin
    i wrote this song, to be smokin n chokin, fuck it, ima by the real green
    ima toke this bong, n heroin needles, to be poken me open, n pop red or blue pills, i get red or blue till, i od, but when i say, cum tumble deeper down the rabbit hole alice
    which is ya ear, quit ya twichin in fear,this is no morpheus trick, i no, no malicetheres no option of popin the pill, n you wont, opens ya i's, stikt like a, super futeristic adict,im only smokin ive spoken, no lies,i gotta quit this spit, im shootin n spazzin
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    holler at me

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ng-388841.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...es-388398.html

    yo, evrytime a hate comments posted, i keep getting better, steppin up and trying harder, why would you be hating me anyways, if im not gonna rap this, scrape ya paper up, this album not only the next album that will change the rap game, but the world to, if your scarred of me sayin i wrote the songs for you, dont trip, ima be dead in about a month anyway, to the mod who keeps lockin my thread, all you did was make me expand and on three other rap sites, just let me do my last task gods appointed me to do, of a dyin kid, to many people are already comin at my neck over here, imk surrounded by enemies, album status,
    its looks like its 16 songs its gonna now, im writing everyday, holler at me, now cuz buy the time we make a trade, im gonna be finished , the moderator even banned my isp, i just switch computers, block this one, i can just go to the librarys hundreds of compters, stop tryin to stop whats unstopable while im living

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    Re: sellin writtin album, haters love me

    this is the best shit ive scene, EVER IN MY FUCKIN LIFE, fuckin crazy rhymes r stacked n stacked, howd you do it? if you rapt this shit you would become the next tupac/ eminem/ not so great as jesus or his father, no disrepect, there just the bosses, but the rhyme scemes on a heavenly lehvel, if i could scrap the paper, id buy it but im fuckin broke, stay up and on your grind fam, you deserve whatever it is you want

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