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October 7th, 2005, 10:29 AM
#31
Banned
that peom was good
it was deep
NICE PIECE
8/10
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October 7th, 2005, 06:11 PM
#32
thanks alot and i luv ur sigs they dope as hell....
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October 9th, 2005, 12:33 AM
#33
love the poem
u have a lot of anger and sadness n u........................
let it out and this will bring a new chapter n ya life.................... TRUST ME
after my cousin Donald died i was mad as hell gettin n2 trouble wit da police let the anger and sadness go n a verse and u need 2 do da same...........
how bout a poem 2 dedicate 2 ya sista///////// u will so much better after u write it............ Put your heart first
PEACE AND LOVE
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October 10th, 2005, 04:56 PM
#34
thnks but after Nikkie left it was hard i dont have time for school but i make time and i manage 4 jobs NOW....and it is hard u try living in my shoes for 24 hrs u would hate it...
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October 10th, 2005, 08:27 PM
#35
nice peice felt the imagery creativity was fine......complexity was good cud of been better but good ...keep it up ill be looking for more peices from u....oh yeah and i also liked how the title matched the peice...and go hit up ma peice honestly its intitled Brotherly Love
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