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  1. #1
    KRISSKASS
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    Adam 12

    Life in da S.C is the same; Gangstas, Crime & Da Drug

    Game;/ Our fault to use this social negativity is widely

    spread in this city/ No pitty for da nitty gritty laying

    on concrete ghetto streets/ Have you seen da other

    side of da rich and famous>?; You cant blame

    them to be where they terretory has a black angus,

    when we got dirty cops trying to shut us down for

    being free in this ghost town; Adam 12 , horsemen

    from hell/ They increase tension to put us in a cell as

    they laugh when they take out da strap/ Having

    full authority to pull the trigger; Just like dat, two

    thumbs snap; They could change da whole story

    of any injustice done to us by easily cuffing da cuffs

    and give fake bluffs to investigators eating donuts/

    Dragnet , or should i say fagnet; Cops and Sherrifs

    going at it/ To protect and serve is their word; Shit, turn

    it around and its more likely were on da ground gettn served

    as they protect their own; Adam 12 cant stop, and

    cant mop da mess they left at home/ Fake warrants; used

    and abused to shake money loose off of a drug dealers

    pants and shoes/ These heroes in blue uniform are showin

    nothing but da opposite side when da camera aint rollin. ;

    Hustling, gambling, and punishing these men with short

    lived dreams; They have no other choice to sell da drugs to

    make their big bucks rise to pay rent in this city with

    a high unemployment rate/ But da pigs will neva relate;

    Instead they hate and make these people pay da price/

    These flatfooted cops don't care of a families despair ;

    Its their job to catch criminals and uphold tha law for

    the safety of all/ They might be some cool cops and some

    may be busters giving you a hard time for their own good

    one; Its funny to fuck around with people less equal dan

    us rich white people/ Fuck around my town is a mistake; Dont

    wait for us to come out an play; Warriors ready to strike

    back non violent , holding it steady; Five O's get so

    paranoid by da movement of da body, each reflex is deadly/

    All it takes for adam 12 to call help is one cut or officers shot;

    Yeah, its da way of the gun they go by so dum/ This is their

    job, but its also mine to keep word dat these pigs don't

    pull out tricks; I don't hate da fact that their job has to be

    done; Its the fear of them doin da wrong moves to get

    their stripes;crashing on small crews dat have no drugs and

    booze, fucked up shit by DA C.U's(Crash Units)/ I'm

    telling a tale of a chicanos face da has gone pale/ These

    crooked cops base their lives on fucking up ours,' Cowards

    and men with no honors/ The badge and the gun; The

    evil and legacy are da bond; Get whats yours and run

    before Da shotgun start shooting at any mexican moving

    suspeciously; Shit, i own da S.C like vercetti own Da Vice

    in Da pitty of This city; Aint no love in this gutter looking


    shitty/

  2. #2
    RAP IS FOR FAGGOTS inspire's Avatar
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    good attempt but i wasnt seeing any real consistent flow, shorten the length of the whole rhyme... the spaces in between lines makes it looks like one bad mother to read... oh and work on your rhyme scheme.... keep rhymin

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    I read about half... it was sick... I agree wit the topic, the flow was a'ight, vocab was descent,... uppin' this shit for sure dawg...
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  4. #4
    KRISSKASS
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    Blunt MC Respect to ya

    Thanks for da compliments my friend, i just appreiciate all

    da support you are giving me by just one flow. i still gots

    a lot to learn and you helping me like you are right now.

  5. #5
    Enigmatic
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    .Inspire.

    I agree with my man Inspire, I didn't see any real flow... You need to work on the way you put it together. Otherwise, i'm uppin'.

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