Me & You, You & Me

[Marek]

Do not form me
Do not shape me
Do not mold me
Do not change me
I am me and that is all i can be
Dont try to make me you
You are you
I am me
That is the way it is sopposed to be
If i was sopposed to be you, I would be
And you wouldn't HAVE TO try and change me
But i was born me and you were born you
If you were sopposed to be me i'm sure you would be
But i do not change you because
I am me and you are you and that is all we can be.

[Maven.]

I really enjoyed this.
it was ridiculously simple...that was the beauty of it.
it was like you were stating the obvious, but it held such deep meaning that it didn't seem obvious at all.
it was applicable to every relationship I've ever had.
it's spelled supposed though.
nice piece =)

[Reeco]

yes good peace man, very simple done but deep if ya know what i mean!!! it says alot without havin to. flow was very good. and also structure!!! keep this up man, and next time write a longer piece so i can enjoy it a bit longer :-)

pz

[Key Tone]

The most simplistic poem makes a perfect piece ever heard of that i think this was amazing but i do want to read longer version from you but i enjoyed.

[$carface]

yea dis piece made me think little...ironically lol...
not becuz it was complicated cuz it wasnt but becuz it had a totally deeper meaning to it anyways good poetic piece

[lyricalchick86]

yea i like dis poem it was good not very long but still showed emotion

[lyricalchick86]

o i forgot

................fav part................
And you wouldn't HAVE TO try and change me
But i was born me and you were born you

[Marek]

thanx.

[Penskills]

It's simple yet very constructive pieces like this that makes me want to come here more often,Very nice one...