WK24: mal diction(1-3) vs EyedealIStic (1-0) (OPEN FOR VOTES)

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Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.


@EyeDealIstic
@mal diction

[mal diction]

he's not showing; i can see it

[EyeDealIstic]

he's not showing me his dick, I wanna see it

You have plenty of others to smooch, so grab one and beat it.

[mal diction]

He cleaves to ball sacks… idolized to the point he pops ish
Snobbish. Leave dude with a idle I.. the way i drops stic

[FaQEyeReddit]

Ok first to vote ��

Let’s start with the stuff I like

Eye: creativity, simplicity
Mal: layers of metaphors and a wild build on the punch.

Eye: he’s not showing; -me his dick I wanna- see it
It’s enough dudes for you to smooch, grab one and go beat it.

Dope twist to use a misquote wish I thought of that although creative I will say it’s not multilayered nor have a complex rhyme scheme.


Mail: He cleaves to ball sacks… idolized to the point he pops ish
Snobbish. Leave dude with a idle I.. the way i drops stic

The rhyme scheme is dope with a lovely choice of words, but that ending is flames. Leave dude with a idle I when I drop stic

A idle eye like a lazy eye then when “eye drops” stic phewwwww nah this is the lyricism I like.


My vote for harder punchline better rhyme scheme and amazing personals @mal diction . This was a hell of a battle tho both came with something. I would give individual awards to eye and mal.
Eye : 6/10 punch 6/10 scheme 9/10 creative , mal 9/10 punch 8.5/10 scheme 8.9/10 creative.