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Thread: Networth v.s. Sinning - Net wins

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    Do you get it yet? Networth's Avatar
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    Networth v.s. Sinning - Net wins

    12 lines, due by midnight tonight.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sinning View Post
    Prepare yourself; Networth. Should be a good battle....
    Good luck.

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    Re: Networth v.s. Sinning

    I'm so dope, I'm a cocaine dealer; I'll have the Narc Shook; you'll get burnt with a serpent's hell's flame like czar books
    I'll have you in checkmate on a checkerboard like lost rooks; I'll have 'Net Swimming with the Fishes' for trying to make this a w(rap) without sharp hooks
    My Beretta is reckless; I'm ready and hectic; try to cross me, and I'll have my double cross etched on a necklace
    I'm better with methods; you're not even special; when is 'worthless worth more than a Djinn' when he's not getting molested
    You're sleeping on the concrete; while I'm sleeping on a flat pillow; I'm a seer; and you couldn't 'smell good' if I axed willow
    My Hell's Flame will SMoke verything that this brat billows; you'll sea the light; I have the book of life for this 'Death Note bitch as I play a Black Chello
    I'lll appease your life; I'll slice you with a measly knife; you're not sick; that's the measles; SIKE!
    I'm a beast with rhymes; I'll seer your eyes with a seering strike; then dump you in the Hosea for trying to be Jesus Christ!
    I'm surround this pussy cats mistress! Black sentence; repentance sedative methods reliishness double helix; trouble Felix; subtle T Kid
    Bubble sea dip; trouble sea sip; singular tongue crush your double helix if you try to walk on water I'll drown you in your baptism!
    I surround wisdom; schism of hollow men; visiting swallow ships; Ramses with the pen I'll throw you in the sand pit with blacketh
    you act shit like cat nip rap sick rap sick practice rapping with in tune elleciactics for I'll talk to your god and you'll never have the wisdom of solomon

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    Do you get it yet? Networth's Avatar
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    Re: Networth v.s. Sinning

    Mmm..

    Sinny ho love to salad, but I don't buy twat from the fat whore
    Let all my niggas cum in the front, n she lettuce leaf out the back door
    !
    Quote Originally Posted by Sinning View Post
    Sharp sword katana tongue; son of a sword; rummage accord; Djinn and Mystic of the Mystic Bible Belt
    All I hear with my six sense is 'I need help'
    U sinnin talkin bout Djinn, kid that shit old and done
    But after I Pop you... won't have a mouth left to put your Golden Sun
    .
    When the polls thru, i'll have my foot up on his throat here maybe
    If MI last ballot is proof, it's cool to smoke herbs like bro on a daily
    .
    On Rb tryna grow, but at the crib movin in stealth
    My fists'll make this man cave, then he can have room for himself
    !
    U gettin respect here/ rappin like that, dont go together
    But fuck how it look, let me commit to Sin.... Said No One Ever
    !
    Swear i wont even waste my damn time formulatin this last rhyme
    This Ho be
    (hobby) a future representation.. of what I do in my past time!


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    Re: Networth v.s. Sinning

    Good verse, this is ready for votes. Good battle. Solid votes necessary.

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    Re: Networth v.s. Sinning - Open For Votes

    May we get some votes, for the flower girl. Would be quite grateful. Thank you.

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    Re: Networth v.s. Sinning - Open For Votes

    Networth:
    Opener- i fuck w the concept and the wording. But all your wordplay is forced to the high heavens. Too forced to let u slide on it
    Golden sun- this was aight
    Smoke- decent current event line. Pretty predictable tho.
    Man cave- lmao i fk w this
    No one ever- wack
    Closer- nah trash. U gotta stay away from these forced ass wordplays bro.

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    Sinning:
    Listen man. U got good ideas. But ur lines are too long. U got 2bars each bar. Separate ur shit. Just stick to:
    1 concept
    1 set up
    1 punchline per bar and u'll be good.


    Vote networth
    Kill a bitch and kill her kid
    all depends what her nigga did



    Boss.

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    Re: Networth v.s. Sinning - Open For Votes

    Golden sun, MI (ironic asf cause I'm from Michigan lol), man cave

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    N/A

    Not trying to be a dick but Sinning has a lot of ideas but he's not wording or executing them properly. Over wording. Shorten it up all like Grimm did but.

    V. networth
    I've beaten you before, you're a joke. Put that comedic shit to a rest
    Your the Jay Pharoah of text. No punchlines at all just an "Eh" imitator at best

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    Re: Networth v.s. Sinning - Open For Votes

    @Networth That man cave line was dope. MI flip was okay. Opening bar was pretty bad. Almost cringe-worthy. All in all it was kind of a hit or miss verse. You definitely have potential though. Just got to work on that execution and try to be more consistent. Still you did enough to take this easy.
    @Sinning I'm getting really tired if giving you the same feed. These stretched lines full of heavily-slanted, mythology-themed rhyme schemes and no punches. You are not going to win battles unless you find creative ways to attack.

    Vote - Net worth

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    Re: Networth v.s. Sinning - Open For Votes

    A stretched out story wit multis

    Vs

    Salad
    Man cave
    Commit to sin

    1 sided battle to me

    V- net

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    Re: Networth v.s. Sinning - Open For Votes

    Networth

    Sinny ho love to salad, but I don't buy twat from the fat whore
    Let all my niggas cum in the front, n she lettuce leaf out the back door!
    ^^OK. I see the wordplay

    U sinnin talkin bout Djinn, kid that shit old and done
    But after I Pop you... won't have a mouth left to put your Golden Sun.
    ^^Not sure about this...

    When the polls thru, i'll have my foot up on his throat here maybe
    If MI last ballot is proof, it's cool to smoke herbs like bro on a daily.
    ^^No sir

    On Rb tryna grow, but at the crib movin in stealth
    My fists'll make this man cave, then he can have room for himself!
    ^^Pretty decent. Not really a diss, more like self-hype

    U gettin respect here/ rappin like that, dont go together
    But fuck how it look, let me commit to Sin.... Said No One Ever!
    ^^Yeah!

    Swear i wont even waste my damn time formulatin this last rhyme
    This Ho be(hobby) a future representation.. of what I do in my past time!
    ^^Forced wordplay, IMO. Not a fan of fancy wordplay for little to no reason


    @Sinning ... with all due respect, your entire verse was a dumpster fire. VOTE = NETWORTH

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