Thrasybulus vs. Bahriman
5 Bar Battle
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Thrasybulus vs. Bahriman
5 Bar Battle
Check.. verses due tonight or by tomorrow night?
Now it's tonight. So we just post whenever we're done?
Thanks. What do you mean by "no more free posting in battles"?
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This site is confusing to me, sorry guys. Here's my verse. Hope I am posting it in the right place:
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For pride, for a grand, or for a half a gram
I’ll rearrange BAHRIMAN’s anatomy like letters in a fucking anagram
Like: BRAHMANI is an Indian Goddess with four ARMs
BRAH, you couldn’t handle four arms spitting gun bars in this forum
When I punch you in the face, your brain will get my forearm
Like Vince Carter dunking, his whole arm though the RIM
Not sure what deity you supposed to be, but BAR God, you’re not HIM
I’ll do you serious HARM man, you and battle rap are not in harmony
I am sorry that you had to be my first body
But I’m out for blood; you’re not a dead MAN walking, you the walking dead, BAHRI
Beat the shit out you! Pull blick & rage hoe
bullets'll have your spine breakdown more than a caged post
Pen got that WOW effect that'll leave this Noob worked
Trash is how Sir Prized..We'll feel that way wen you drop a good verse
W/e throw on the field? gets shut down, fa'real Thras
I'll let the Mack Hit ur head harder than a Khalil Sack
I bring Kaos! meaning the tool'll have you left domed
Put the Roc on your brain N we aint bumpin Maciano in your Headphones
You WOO'n aint in your Nature boy, Gun got kid scared
Put you in the corner W/a Chop to your chest, you'd think I was Ric Flair
Nice verse, now what? LOL I appreciate what the administrators are doing for the culture, but this site needs serious overhaul to be more user friendly.
Interesting battle here, two names i haven't heard before and they were attention grabbers for sure.
The opening bars from each battler were hitting in their own way, with the edge going to the more structurally sound.
T:
For pride, for a grand, or for a half a gram
I’ll rearrange BAHRIMAN’s anatomy like letters in a fucking anagram
It a loss here, but good attempt..
vs
B:
Beat the shit out you! Pull blick & rage hoe
bullets'll have your spine breakdown more than a caged post
Win here, although the setup is slightly lacking it had good flow.
The middle of the verses were slightly sub par with T's being a bit more intersting to read, although much less structured.
However it came down to the closer and B: definitely wrapped it up a lot better than his opponent with fluid structure and an actual setup and punch that landed.
T:
I am sorry that you had to be my first body
But I’m out for blood; you’re not a dead MAN walking, you the walking dead, BAHRI
Oh NO..thats a loss
vs
B:
You WOO'n aint in your Nature boy, Gun got kid scared
Put you in the corner W/a Chop to your chest, you'd think I was Ric Flair
Oh Yea.. Thats a win.
Vote/ Bahriman
Thras:
Opener- decent attempt. But the whole anagram angle is played to death.
Vince carter- this was a good idea
Vs
Bahriman-
Opner- decent
Closer- decent.
Vote bahriman
Beat the shit out you! Pull blick & rage hoe
bullets'll have your spine breakdown more than a caged post
vs
nothing...
bad battle overall...
thrasy needs to practice structure and punchin,... instead of focusing on the nameflips...
V- Bah
Mediocre name plays
Vs
Beat the shit out you! Pull blick & rage hoe
bullets'll have your spine breakdown more than a caged post
V- bah
Bahriman:
Beat the shit out you! Pull blick & rage hoe
bullets'll have your spine breakdown more than a caged post
^^Hmmmm
Pen got that WOW effect that'll leave this Noob worked
Trash is how Sir Prized..We'll feel that way wen you drop a good verse
^^Wordplay, meh...
W/e throw on the field? gets shut down, fa'real Thras
I'll let the Mack Hit ur head harder than a Khalil Sack
^^Unknown reference to me
I bring Kaos! meaning the tool'll have you left domed
Put the Roc on your brain N we aint bumpin Maciano in your Headphones
^^Another gun reference, meh...
You WOO'n aint in your Nature boy, Gun got kid scared
Put you in the corner W/a Chop to your chest, you'd think I was Ric Flair
^^LOL... Yeah, this was fire.
Thrasybulus:
For pride, for a grand, or for a half a gram
I’ll rearrange BAHRIMAN’s anatomy like letters in a fucking anagram
^^Weak. What does his anatomy have to do with an anagram? Everybody can rearrange an anagram.
Like: BRAHMANI is an Indian Goddess with four ARMs
BRAH, you couldn’t handle four arms spitting gun bars in this forum
^^Not clever at all
When I punch you in the face, your brain will get my forearm
Like Vince Carter dunking, his whole arm though the RIM
Not sure what deity you supposed to be, but BAR God, you’re not HIM
^^Nope. Stretched and forced
I’ll do you serious HARM man, you and battle rap are not in harmony
I am sorry that you had to be my first body
But I’m out for blood; you’re not a dead MAN walking, you the walking dead, BAHRI
^^Oh no... Stretched. Dead man? Walking dead??
Vote: Bahriman
5-0 bahr wins